Part I mean Chapter

 
THX FOR THE WARNING 🙏 I WONT READ THIS CR**.

hey bro i can see your a hater right here and if u don'tlike this book or yaoi just drop it don't make it worst man don't make it worse i bet u can't even do anything way better thean this for you to say i end at chapter 8 why not continue reading it before complaining bro SHUTup  please dont make it worse drop it find something your licking sir

@Hannah Hater? Man how old are you? 5?? This is not hate, just a comment, a so-called OPINION that's what this section is for- for da** REVIEWS 

If you haven't noticed, I've already drop it as I said, so the advice to "drop it" is very not needed

Can I DO something BETTER... Err... YEEES? literally EVERYONE could do SOMETHING BETTER then THIS THINK that has AN ACTUAL GOOD STORY and doesn't rely on CONTINUOUS RA🍇E AND PRETENDING THAT IT'S OK you just need to sit for a while, think and plan, and you don't need to have any great writing or artistic skill for it 💀
(And I say this as someone who is privately trying to write not only a BL book but also a game- So "Yes" it is possible and it is not difficult, unfortunately you just have to want and try and not take the easy way out and be lazy)
 
I will not continue reading this because I DO NOT intend to read and support a story that throws ra🍇e as if it was the most normal good thing while showing that it is supposedly OK because it is not

If it was a good story, at least one character would not treat ra🍇e, moles🍇tion and taking advantage of someone's lack of knowledge and naivety as normal at the beginning???
And as I said, this section is for leaving REVIEWS so what fuc**** right or strange magical pressure do you have to tell me to "shut up"? Like tf dude if my opinion bothers you then ignore it simple and logical looking at the number of positive (unfortunately) reviews, mine doesn't change much anything practically, so I don't understand where you feel such pressure kiddo

I will not change my opinion/review or delete it, especially since I am warning other readers who do not feel like reading the first better sh** without a story that is ra🍇e corn.

If it bothers you, too bad! It's your problem if you don't have better things to do and worry about.

And learn the meaning of the words "hater" for the future because I'm really tired of people throwing this word around left and right without understanding it, it doesn't make you look like some intelligent person on the contrary, it lowers the perception of the value of what you say with all due respect

as an athiest--you're doing g**'s work with this review. thank u for saving my braincells