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IvernPretty good on  Relife Player
Geez. Making me go with 4 stars. You practically forced me, y'know. I didn't want to. I was ready to give you my heart. My wretched, husk of a heart. But you just had to bust my figurative ãss uh? 

You see, this one is pretty contradictory. A regression story, but not exactly a dungeon raiding plot. A distinctive and plump art style, but with a somewhat disturbing thing for thighs. Since the cast is majorly made of children, you can guess where the problem lies. And so can the FBI. Nothing too egregious, but a little uncomfy. 

Apart from that, again with the contradictions. The characterization is unapologetically cringe. Like, tryhardy as fu**, but it does have its moments of fluff and family warmth which I genuinely appreciate, along with the bålls of not time skipping for all his teen years and still not becoming boring. 

And also, the action. Absolutely majestic. In the sense that it decided to go with a continuous budget splurge and every fight is a visually stunning dance of precise movements, amazing art and dynamic drawing prowess. It is remarkable. And all in service to... *drumroll* A pretty... okay... Power system. Key word, AGAIN, is contradiction: I love the fights, but the asspulls abound. Mana can be used for everything and nothing, growth is unsteady, there is no particular identity in each character's powerset. It could be worse, but also a lot better.

Listen, "system" tropes exist for a reason. They are a cheat for giving structure and definition to your power system. If you are not able to do the hard as fu** fine balancing needed for a soft magic system, go with those. They are cheap and effective. 

Sadly, not with this one. Hence, the 4 stars. Göd, just imagine, this kind of action art in the service of proper powersets... Downright lewd. 8+ on the Ivern Scale™️!
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NCduckyRocks on  Painter Of The Night
A definitely good read 10/10 totally recommend.
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bloverRocks on  Cry Me a River
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Nur Carissa Putri au...Rocks on  Dark Fall
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MarianneRRocks on  Flowers are flowers, leaves are leaves
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KristinaPretty good on  Love-Shower for the Twisted Flower
Pretty good
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ZCVMeh on  Baby, Punk Kid
Meh
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CathrineRocks on  Night by the sea
Pretty good
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Simpforyou608Rocks on  Non-Refundable Alpha
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XEXI1996Rocks on  Chiguha Kuna Kisu
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Sour CinnaminRocks on  Palace of Bardo
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XEXI1996Rocks on  Hajimete Dakedo Camera No Maede
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erikalovesblRocks on  Sign
words can't explain how much I love this manwha, out of EVERY manwha I have read this is my all time favorite (I've read ALOT). THIS IS SUCH A WHOLESOME AND LOVELY BL and even the sus scenes combined ABSOLUTELY YES. I love this smsmsm the character designs, the personality, the comedy EVERYTHING CHEFS KISS. Please read I recommend so much
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some of the bl I've read
 

can't think straight 
dear sister, I've become a blessed maiden
bj alex 
sadistic beauty bl side story
stranger than friends 
sign 
under the greenlight 
shutline
lucky paradise

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@erikalovesbl sadistic beauty bl??😂 Girl u okay?

Love lightsabers and bootholes

hate that horse face (jinx) with passion 
Absolutely love yohan(sign) and seagull daddy( our sunny days). Wanna be MD's b!tch(bj alex).

YfzRocks on  Delivery Hug Therapy
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BailuojiziRocks on  Rules
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XEXI1996Rocks on  Celestial
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KristinaMeh on  Ryuuku Ai Utsu
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DeeRocks on  Tell Me You Can Hear It
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